navwin » Archives » The Corner Pub » Do mosquito's go to Heaven?
The Corner Pub
Post A Reply Post New Topic Do mosquito's go to Heaven? Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
songwater
Junior Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 32
Marietta,Ga.

0 posted 2000-06-06 11:24 PM


Do mosquito's go to Heaven?
or those pesky little fleas.
That bite you on your ankles,
that bite you on your knees.
What about the spider,
that crawls up on your pants,
or house fly's or bumble bees,
or little red fire ants.
What about the crocadile'
or sharks in the sea.
Things that like to bite,
or poisen ivey.

or colds or caughs or earaches,
the measles or the mumps.
Anything thats scary,
anything that bumps.

there's nothing lives in Heaven'
that bothers you or me.
Cause Jesus lives in Heaven'
He's the king of kings




 ?


© Copyright 2000 Bobby Barfield - All Rights Reserved
Little_Spyro
Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659
San Diego, CA, USA
1 posted 2000-06-07 12:46 PM


Oh yeah, AMEN to that!!!  

I believe that crocodiles and sharks go to heaven...or some kind of heaven, maybe they have a separate place to go, maybe the Great Pool in the Sky   But I happen to know a shark AND a croc, and they're pretty nice guys!  

Great post, songwater! Hope to see lots more!!       


Little Spyro T. Dragon
__________________________________________________________
Mosquitoes would have one heck of a hard time getting through dragons' scales.


[This message has been edited by Little_Spyro (edited 06-08-2000).]

Jon Mewett
Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

2 posted 2000-06-07 04:14 AM


Hi Songwater

I love the 'child' feel to your poem.

This would be great in a Sunday school sort of situation I think.

Nice

Jon

childomine
Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL
3 posted 2000-06-08 07:16 AM


I second that "AMEN".  Wherever they go, it's all good.  I believe all of living creation has somewhere wonderful to go.  This is cute and as Jon said, would make a good Sunday School piece.

 ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is....
Black Eagle
Oglala Sioux holy man


Yu Lan
Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand
4 posted 2000-06-09 12:48 PM


Hey, all living things have a right to be happy!! ^^ Discrimination against little bugs!! ^^ Those poor little things r just trying to get along, they never did anything so terribly wrong! And yet look at all the wrong we as a race have done! .. ^^

Nicely written songwater, what a cute poem. That title really caught my attention too.. ^^

Well done..
Lynne


Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » The Corner Pub » Do mosquito's go to Heaven?

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary