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Jonas
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since 2000-03-03
Posts 796
Oregon

0 posted 2000-06-06 10:00 PM


spinning gold disk
pounding my ears
with metallic chords

hold me hostage
from the real world

penetrate my mind
scattering thoughts
until only the beat
remains

6/6/00
Gary Pence


© Copyright 2000 Gary - All Rights Reserved
Little_Spyro
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since 2000-01-09
Posts 659
San Diego, CA, USA
1 posted 2000-06-07 12:39 PM


Hmmm...I only ever get that feeling when I'm listening to punk rock...LOL I don't listen to that stuff, but I sure know how, ah...'cleansing' music can be!   Great piece of work, Jonas!  

Little Spyro T. Dragon
Lead Keyboardist, The Hard Rock Dragons  

Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

2 posted 2000-06-07 04:21 AM


Yep in all music the message is powerful in fact 'the song remains the same'as someone once said.

Jon

childomine
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL
3 posted 2000-06-07 07:43 AM


There's something about getting lost in  music....
Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow
4 posted 2000-06-08 05:17 PM


Gary, Oh, how I enjoyed this poem, as I also enjoy getting lost in the world of music.  
ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
5 posted 2000-06-08 05:38 PM


Gary; Great poem, I love music and love to dance, Music can take me to never never land too. Ellie

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