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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA 
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Being a poet may be scary, So few, close would tarry But still I can laugh, Because two true friends I have Named Thesaurus and Rhyming Dictionary. If others understood this guy And my lines, which are so good,(my,my) They'd say "Great" and "Amen," Instead of "Duh" and "Ahem!" (I'm gald only the Smart ones reply. I came and ain't been the same since, To this poetry site--par excellence Where poems are the sensation, Posted , seeking validation Hoping they won't revoke my poet's license! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I can't imagine anyone revoking your poetic license, David.....This is really clever and cute!  Denise |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
deleeme, a wonderful poem. I came and ain't been the same since, To this poetry site--par excellence Where poems are the sensation, Posted , seeking validation Hoping they won't revoke my poet's license I think you speak for all of us here. ------------------------ "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "Libraries gave us power Then work came and made us free What price now for a shallow piece of dignity" Nicky Wire, A design for Life. manic street preachers "Rock 'n' roll is our epiphany Culture, alienation, boredom and despair" "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
David; Wonderful. Terrific tribute to our corner of heaven here at Passions. I gotta get me one of them there rhyming dictionerys. Maybe then I'll take the plunge, (but not in Dennis's pool)! Great job. Sis 02 |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
They won't revoke it that's for sure. Somebody may start charging you for it though! Poetic licence :The only licence that is FREE. Amen to that. Jon |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
David, I see "APPROVAL", stamped all over them. Good job. Is ellie, "Thesaurus" and Becky, "Rhyming D."? I'm going to quit doing you this way. From now on, just decent honest comments. I promise,....maybe. marcy |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
I love the second verse. I had to chuckle when picturing people running for a dictionary to find out what the words mean. |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
David - I stopped in here for a peek and find you and David and Ellie, I'll have to stop in here more often. What a terrific poem. I didn't know there was such a thing as a rhyming dictionary. Guess I learn something from you no matter what forum you're in. Bonnie |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
David, You've said a mouthful! Ah the life of a poet! Will they ever understand us? LOL Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Death of Valor Junior Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 20New Orleans |
That's good! Adorable and fun, I really enjoyed it. Nice job. ^_^ Kill me later - I deserve it - but for now just smile. |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
hey, there is such a thing as a rhyming dictionary?? Humm, I must try to find one, 'coz I have terrible trouble with rhyming poetry!! lol.. I like this deleeme.. a cutsie poem.. yeah, u do get comments like that! ^_^ DUH!! hehe.. Lynne |
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