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a_little_girl
Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307
San Alejandro, HI, USA

0 posted 2000-06-06 01:47 PM


Well...better get back to work...*grumble, grumble*
_______________________________________

I met this person the other day,
Warmed my heart, old and frayed
Gave me light before I knew
What this person has been through

This person was nice and fine
and I may say that he was divine
From him I knew love
and from then on I knew that;
he was from above...

Well here was the hard part,
he moved away and broke my heart.
He took away what was most dear to me,
but now I made him too blind to see

That he had a gift
rather well known
it was love
non-divine
but love  just the same

-a_little_girl    





[This message has been edited by a_little_girl (edited 06-07-2000).]

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Little_Spyro
Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659
San Diego, CA, USA
1 posted 2000-06-06 02:21 PM


Ouch...that HAS to hurt!  

Another sad story...why can't we have more happy endings in the world?


Little Spyro T. Dragon

[This message has been edited by Little_Spyro (edited 06-06-2000).]

dgvarner
Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
2 posted 2000-06-06 02:33 PM


sometimes love only "feels" divine ....    

dg
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 "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..."  dgvarner

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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-06-06 02:42 PM


The goodbyes can be very hard indeed.  

Denise

Jon Mewett
Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

4 posted 2000-06-07 04:35 AM


Love:As his wings may enfold you so may he crucify you.

But better to have felt it.

Jon

childomine
Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL
5 posted 2000-06-08 07:43 AM


Love - a beautiful gift that can be a terrible torment.  Sad to let go.......  
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