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Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 2000-06-05 05:08 PM


Humanity's Voice

Trowel the silence
with your bellowing cry's
touch the angel
squelch your own sweet surprise.

Her whisper sings
as sound reaches magnitudes
know the reason
before harsh attitudes.

The yonder land
barren with sorry men
the cost of sin
dead to this writer's pen.

Not the peace corps
but humanity's voice
shall ring the bells
determining our choice.


[This message has been edited by Lost Dreamer (edited 06-05-2000).]

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Little_Spyro
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since 2000-01-09
Posts 659
San Diego, CA, USA
1 posted 2000-06-05 08:58 PM


Wow...

Talk about a peaceful message!   Beautifully written, too! Great job on this, Dreamer!  

This is the kind of thing I should frame...


Little Spyro T. Dragon

Alle'cram
Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
2 posted 2000-06-05 10:23 PM


"humanity's voice
shall ring the bells
determining our choice."

Nice poem, especially liked above line. marcy

Jana Tovey
Member
since 2000-05-30
Posts 257
USA
3 posted 2000-06-05 10:36 PM


When will we use our voices, in unison, so that the effect is evident to even the dullest of the dull?

Beautiful expression of something that is coming...maybe?  I hope!

Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

4 posted 2000-06-06 09:07 AM


Another great one, Gloria!  

Denise

Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

5 posted 2000-06-06 09:51 AM


L D your on a roll,really enjoyed this poem and message.

Jon

Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow
6 posted 2000-06-06 09:19 PM


Little_Spyro: Thank you so much, what a delightful response, you've plastered a smile on my face.  

Marcy: thank you very much.

Jana: Thanks for reading and replying.  

Denise: Thank you much.  

Jon: Thank you very much, glad you enjoyed.  

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