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Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
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Michigan, U.S.A.

0 posted 2000-06-05 10:02 AM


Gray,overcast skies
Imminent, wet squall coming
Turbulent winds gust
It is a beautiful day
My first day of Vacation!

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 Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)


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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
1 posted 2000-06-05 12:00 PM


Free at last! For a little while, anyway.
Have a great one too.

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Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
2 posted 2000-06-05 10:35 PM


This made me laugh!! Get a day off, flood come, with a squall & winds!  marcy
Jana Tovey
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since 2000-05-30
Posts 257
USA
3 posted 2000-06-05 10:40 PM


Did you pack your umbrella?
Romy
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since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170
Plantation, Florida
4 posted 2000-06-06 09:01 AM


Any day is a beautiful day when it's all yours to enjoy!  Have fun!
Denise
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5 posted 2000-06-06 09:24 AM


But of course! The sun and warm weather return when vacation is over....hehehe

Denise

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
6 posted 2000-06-06 04:50 PM


Cead Mile Failte o hEireann - welcome to Ireland. lol

because where ever you are it sounds like a typical irish summer though we had sun for the past few days...must be the green house effect.

loved the poem.


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"I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards

"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"Libraries gave us power
Then work came and made us free
What price now for a shallow piece of dignity"
Nicky Wire, A design for Life.

manic street preachers
"Rock 'n' roll is our epiphany
Culture, alienation, boredom and despair"

"To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting."

E.E Cummings.



kaile
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singapore
7 posted 2000-06-10 07:11 AM


nothing can dampen my spirits when the much-awaited holidays arrive too

love your sense of humour and this one is no exception

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