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Dennis L. White
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0 posted 2000-06-05 09:55 AM


Graduation day has arrived,
For this day we long have strived,
Coming out of our coma,
We grab our Diploma,
It's a wonder our parents survived!


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 Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)


[This message has been edited by Dennis L. White (edited 06-06-2000).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2000-06-05 10:41 AM


Survive they did, and proud they are!  Well done!

 Sunshine

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~


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2 posted 2000-06-05 10:47 AM


Terrific Dennis, sure hit the nail on the head with this one!!!! Bonnie
ellie LeJeune
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3 posted 2000-06-05 11:22 AM


Dear Dennis; LOL! This is very funny and excruciatingly to the point. Actually, I don't know how you did it, with three of them? Ellie C):^}

 02



Jana Tovey
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4 posted 2000-06-05 10:39 PM


Parents breate a huge sigh of relief...so do teachers.

Loved it!

childomine
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5 posted 2000-06-06 06:42 AM


This is so.....right on!
Denise
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6 posted 2000-06-06 09:12 AM


This is cute, Dennis!  

Denise

Jon Mewett
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7 posted 2000-06-06 09:58 AM


You have sure grauated in poetry anyway.

Whats the other diploma for?  

Jon

a_little_girl
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8 posted 2000-06-06 01:35 PM


I LIKE IT! It really sums up the feeling of knowing that you don't have to go to the same damn high school anymore!
-a_little_girl    

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9 posted 2000-06-08 05:01 PM


Dennis, This is great, you said it all with so few words.  
Munda
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10 posted 2000-06-10 05:13 AM


Wonderful Dennis !  
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11 posted 2000-06-15 11:46 PM


Smiles across the miles Dennis
deleeme
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12 posted 2000-06-16 04:11 AM


Dennis,
  I think this is one of your witty best--it sure captured the impression, on both sides of the graduation coin!
            You Go, Bro!   David

 "GOD GIVES- but man must open his hand." (German Proverb)


kelieth
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13 posted 2000-06-17 12:42 PM


Congratulations. on graduating.  

A great descritpion for such a joyous occasion.




 Kevin

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Honeybee
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14 posted 2000-06-17 09:27 PM




LOL Dennis!  As always, you have a wicked sense of humour.  Not only are you a great poet, but you are so good at these     I often wonder how my poor Mom survived, I was an honour student, but I was still a crazy teen.  Now, I'm in university, still doing well in my studies, but I'm even more crazier, oh my poor Mom LOL  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee


[This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 06-17-2000).]

Dennis L. White
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15 posted 2000-06-19 08:19 AM


Thanks for all your kind comments, I wrote this on the occasion of my triplet sons recently graduating from High School. I've had five teenagers under one roof for over 2 years now (YIKES) some days are better than others LOL. Dennis :^)
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