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Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
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0 posted 2000-06-03 11:12 AM


Fragile winged beauties
Kaleidoscopic colors
Butterfly ballet!

Wafting on a breeze
Graceful, fluttering delight
Flower garden mimes!



 Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

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Alle'cram
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1 posted 2000-06-03 11:17 AM


Dennis, Whoowee, loved the butterfly ballet, wafting on a breeze! Soft, colorful, serene.
JOY 14
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2 posted 2000-06-03 11:43 AM


I can see the bright wings fluttering over streams and pastel stones in my imaginary garden...enjoyed a lot by me!

Joy

ellie LeJeune
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3 posted 2000-06-03 11:49 AM


Dear Dennis; What a delightful gift you have created! These are beyond loveliness, truly.
twin butterflies of delight! Love, Sis

 02



dgvarner
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4 posted 2000-06-04 12:41 PM


dennis!  these are great!  "mimes" and "ballets"...  wonderful words to put with butterflies!!  may be my favorites so far     will have to send these to my mom..she's got a butterfly fetish..!

dg


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5 posted 2000-07-16 11:33 AM


Dennis, this is volumes said in few words!!
Beauties your haikus are but fragile they are most definitely NOT!

i see there are some haikus that i havent replied to yet...rest assured my friend that i will let them see daylight again

Denise
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6 posted 2000-07-16 04:10 PM


Very beautiful, Dennis! I love these!

Denise

Justbleu
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7 posted 2000-07-17 02:58 AM


How very lovely this is...sooo colorful and bright!!!  
Bridgette


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midnightblues
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8 posted 2000-07-17 07:19 AM


Wow Dennis! U painted a beautiful picture with ur words! *S*

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Honeybee
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9 posted 2001-03-15 06:36 PM



Dennis, you must know how much I love butterflies?! and your haikus are gorgeous dedications to these winged miracles! Wonderful work!

Take care,
Melissa~

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10 posted 2001-03-16 05:56 PM


Oh the last line was simply wonderful!
Great haiku!



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I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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11 posted 2001-03-16 08:16 PM


I don't see many butterfiles, so thanks for sharing the imagary

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.


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