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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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i may not have much to say i may stutter on my way but listen to me listen i need for you to hear if i pause for just a moment please dont look away for even as you do i'm on my way back i'm trying to gather my thoughts that i may unravel them quickly enough before you lose interest look at me please look at me i need to be heard it may not seem important but it is to me can you hear me can you listen can you understand my heart please --dgvarner "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner |
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Jana Tovey Member
since 2000-05-30
Posts 257USA |
This is a beautiful request. Who could deny it? |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Well, I most definitely heard this tree fall...lol  I'll do my best to grant your request And maybe a little bit more... For as you may be a fan of me, Your work I adore a little bit more!  Another masterpiece, dg! Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
You have captured here I believe a desperate moment in time.When you want to be heard so bad it hurts,and words don't come quick enough. Nice writing Jon |
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breezeinnc Junior Member
since 2000-04-26
Posts 47USA |
Very Nice. Up to your usual high standards. Keep on the good work breezeinnc |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Perhaps this need to be heard, is where the beginnings of poetry begin? A poem I can relate to, and understand. |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Great! These are familiar thoughts. I am in awe of your delivery. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
A very honest, hearfelt plea. Very well expressed! Denise |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
jana: who could deny?..someone very close to me....  she's a workaholic--a good woman, my mother, but she often doesnt leave time for her family...little spyro: thank you so much for your "adoration!"  ..a masterpiece, huh?..youre too kind...  jon: my "desperate moment in time" comes back around every now and then! just one of those things i guess.. breeze: why thank you--and when are we gonna see some more of YOUR high-standard work?? septsong: i've been told my writing is something people can easily understand and relate to..i like to take that as a compliment thank you..alle' and dsnyder: thank you greatly for your encouragement! dg "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- OUCH! felt this one in a big way. awesome poem. i hope things are better with your mom now. love you, -tricks < !signature--> "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 10-10-2000).] |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
This is well-written, a plea maybe too many of us should hear, even when we have promised ourselves we will be "different" from the people who have failed to hear us. But after all, isn't that one of the reasons we write, to make ourselves heard? To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
tricks..we go thru phases.. thanks for reading all my old posts! K..i think that is probably a big reason why we write..to be heard..for SOMEONE to hear.. thanks for reading hugs, dg she doesnt want the kind of love she can live with--she wants the kind she cant live without -clint black |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
 Oops. Double post...[This message has been edited by Broken_Winged_Angel (edited 10-12-2000).] |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Wow...You captured the plea for someone to hear you very well...  It's hard when no one seems to hear...With a little piece of tomorrow, You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye. Because today won't last forever, And the past will only make you cry. |
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