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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... 
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Immortal She is forever standing at our secret pond beneath our loving tree. Welcome late-spring breeze lifting summer dress and hat ever so slightly. She is dropping a rose frozen forever in time it cascades from her hand. Around her, the pond the cat-tails, the bird song all captured deliciously. She is smiling playfully as rose follows petals to rest amidst lily-pads. A buzz of bumblebee breeze dancing leaves above mid-morning sun seems to kiss her. She laughs hearing her name turns with anticipation burned forever is the sight. Even as life continues... for that split second her beauty is immortalized. 6/00 EndoftheRoad bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
I love how this reads like a portrait painted with the soft pastels of your words. Apsolutely breathtaking and so romantic! Ellie 02 |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
ooohh ...that was cool! it leaves us with an awesome snapshot of romance--and i like that romance..keep it comin!! great poetry!! dg "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very beautiful, Daniel! Absolutely beautiful! What does EndoftheRoad mean? Denise |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
How very romantic!!! This is beautiful Dan. Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
thank you each for your encouragement... appreciate your notes. EndoftheRoad is my current dwelling designation. Wherever I lay my head I nickname so that I may organize the closet-full of this stuff...lol though it has failed to keep things organized it has been valuable used as an ID/tracking/retrieval system. bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
bleeding, What a peaceful loving poem. Great job. |
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