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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Oh alien world my new life, will you be kind to a stranger who still has her hastily packed bags laying near the front door? |
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Jana Tovey Member
since 2000-05-30
Posts 257USA |
Sounds like you are covering all your bases...hope the dash for the door isn't necessary. I envy the adventure ahead of this person. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
TANKA! 5-7-5-7-7 ..see there, i learned something by making inquiries  good one debbie! "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is great, Debbie! Denise |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
im sorry, Debbie that i took so long to reply...gosh where was I then? this is a most excellent first attempt at Tanka...the ending is not stated clearly ,leaving this reader to wonder what future the stranger has before her moi like poems that make me wonder a little may i have the pleasure of seeing more tankas from you? |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Thanks Kaile, Now that I know what a Tanka is, I would be happy to try and write another one sometime! Debbie |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
I duno wad's a tanka, but I still enjoyed reading this piece! *S* If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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