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Casonova Junior Member
since 2000-04-29
Posts 35Mays Landing |
While God stood watch, I fell in love with you. He knew all along and helped us through we shared the laughter we shared the pain and God helped us fly despite the pouring rain He watched our friendship blossom into Love And I'm sure he smiled as he watched from above Our love is so pure we'll never break apart For this love is taken Straight from God's heart And on this special day As we both say "I do" I'm sure heaven is silent For God's listening too |
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Jana Tovey Member
since 2000-05-30
Posts 257USA |
Were you wed, and were these the vows? Sorry, I'm just being nosey. Very romantic and idealic. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
what a perfect thought--GOD as matchmaker.... i like this one.. "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Excellent.  God is the only true matchmaker. Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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Casonova Junior Member
since 2000-04-29
Posts 35Mays Landing |
Thanks all for replying, And Jana Tovey. just to let you know, No, i did not get married, and am not even engaged. But my sister is getting married and I am trying to write a poem for her, i just don't know what Idea to go with. thanks again.. Casonova. Desire and determination, can bring any goal within reach. |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Well, I'm definitely not married yet, but I believe deep down that God's the one behind bringing my girlfriend and I together... ...and I've been thanking Him ever since! Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
~Casonova~ This is beautiful! I, too, belive that God watches over us and has created soul mates for all of us. You should definately give this to your sister, she would love it. You are a very talented poet! Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Love is the threshing floor Marriage the mill children the loaves All kneeded by the masters Hand your poem is lovely Jon |
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Casonova Junior Member
since 2000-04-29
Posts 35Mays Landing |
Thanks all for your replies, they are greatly appreciated. I am still not sure If I am going to give this one to my sister, there is somthing that I just don't like about it, But I can't point it out, so i can correct it. I Just have to work on it a litle more i think, well thanks again, and take care... Casonova.. Desire and determination, can bring any goal within reach. |
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