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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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shake me i falter push me and i lose my ground love me i learn love "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner |
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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
The shaking, pushing, and falling, at least I think, is the learning of love. You should see the scrapes on my knees! Nice one, *applaud*! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
A perfect senryu! Wise words indeed, something for us to live by. I knew that you could write an awesome senryu!  Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
 thanks for believing in me melissa! wob..you and me both with the scraped knees..! "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
A wise and true senryu! |
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Jana Tovey Member
since 2000-05-30
Posts 257USA |
So true...wise words for those who value love. |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Words to live by especially for parents. I also like the sound of it. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very nice! Denise |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
DGV, Simple , yet profound, WELL DONE! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate As the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance! D.L.White :^) |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
apologises for replying to this so late A TRUE senyru this is...such words of wisdom compacted in these three lines this reminds me of a saying which roughly goes like this: Walk in front and i may not follow Walk behind and i may not lead Walk beside me and be my friend this senyru gives me the same kind of "feel"  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DGVarner~ A well-done senyru .... thought-provoking. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
thanks to all of you for your replies!! "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
Well Put. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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