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Brenda Hall
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since 2000-05-30
Posts 88
Texas,USA

0 posted 2000-05-31 11:18 AM


Once she was young and at play,
Likd a bird,she sang a sweet song!
Now she is bound to a Wheelchair.
To make her own way along!

Here we are shackled with sorrow
With so many burdens to bear,
In 'Heaven' our bodies are perfect
No 'Wheelchairs',up there!

In that land there will be,
No petition and no prayer
All will be 'blessed glory'
No 'Wheelchairs',up there!

No 'crippling' disease will plague us!
No pain any place or any where!
We will move 'free'as angels,
No 'Wheelchairs',up there!


[This message has been edited by Brenda Hall (edited 05-31-2000).]

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Songbird
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since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184
Missouri
1 posted 2000-05-31 12:17 PM


Very nicely written, it will be wonderful! Hope to see more of your poems.
childomine
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL
2 posted 2000-05-31 12:19 PM


The title of this caught my attention.  I have a loved one who has gone through he** in the past 3 years and just beginning (again) to walk with the aid of a cane.  You're right - no wheelchairs up there!!!  No pain.  No sorrow.  Nice poem.
Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
3 posted 2000-05-31 12:35 PM


Welcome to the family! What a great entrance! I look forward to reading more from you. Please check your email for a special message.  
dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
4 posted 2000-05-31 02:51 PM


wont that be a great place to be...     nothing but good stuff!  and..no wheelchairs needed...

 "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner

Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

5 posted 2000-06-01 08:31 PM


Welcome to Passions, Brenda! This is a great poem!  

Denise

Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

6 posted 2000-06-02 10:23 AM


Welcome indeed  

No wheelchairs but plenty of poets so I've heard.

Welcome again

Jon

Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
7 posted 2000-06-02 09:40 PM


Brenda, Beautifully written truth. I love your entrance as you opened the door. marcy
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