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Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
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Michigan, U.S.A.

0 posted 2000-05-30 01:21 PM


Mosquito flies by
Then circles in zig-zag path
Seeks its' next meal, SPLAT!


  Moonbeams radiate
As the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance!

D.L.White :^)


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Songbird
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since 1999-12-15
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Missouri
1 posted 2000-05-30 01:38 PM


Amen on that one. Hate those little critters!
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
2 posted 2000-05-30 03:38 PM


LOL...cute..but did you know that mosquitoes prefer the female human to the male? Our blood is sweeter I think..  
dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
3 posted 2000-05-30 03:44 PM


i like the "SPLAT" part the best..    

hmm.. (POET deVINE)i didnt know that bit of trivia on mosquitos...dont really like that news!

 "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner

kaile
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singapore
4 posted 2000-05-30 09:12 PM


like that SPLAT best too...Way to go, mosquito-buster
brian madden
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ireland
5 posted 2000-05-31 04:39 PM


Glad that Ireland is Mosquito free though I hate flies especially when they make noise while I am trying to sleep that is the only time I would kill them...so let that be a warning don't wake me during the night or else....lol  

great poem... it inspired me.

kill kill kill the Mosquito
kill kill kill the fly
kill kill killer bees....run run run away.




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"Here chewing your tail is joy"

Richey Edwards

"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"Will you accuse me as I hide Behind these layers of disguise And the mirrors of my own happiness.I've loved the freedom of being inside
Need a new start and a different time
Something grows in the space between me
And it's twisting and changing this fragile body" -Nicky Wire



Jana Tovey
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since 2000-05-30
Posts 257
USA
6 posted 2000-05-31 05:05 PM


There is no dignity in this death!  
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