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Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
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Michigan, U.S.A.

0 posted 2000-05-30 11:00 AM


My grass is growing
(Fueled by the too frequent rain)
By great leaps and bounds
It mocks me with shear delight
Me and my broken lawn mower!


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       Moonbeams radiate
As the veiling cloud has past
    Playful shadows dance!

         D.L.White :^)



[This message has been edited by Dennis L. White (edited 05-30-2000).]

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kaile
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singapore
1 posted 2000-05-30 11:14 AM


Nice one, Dennis....have i told you that your tanka and haiku always make my day?

WRITE ON!

BTW, is that sheer or shear?will like to know

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
2 posted 2000-05-30 11:21 AM


kaile,
   The use of the word SHEAR was an intentional play on words, thanks for your kind words.
Dennis :^)

  Moonbeams radiate
As the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance!

D.L.White :^)


kaile
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singapore
3 posted 2000-05-30 11:37 AM


suspected this is the case but wanted to make sure
dgvarner
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4 posted 2000-05-30 03:34 PM


heehee...you and your broken lawn mower aye...

funny one!

 "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner

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