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Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
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Michigan, U.S.A.

0 posted 2000-05-30 09:30 AM


Nocturnal dew clings
To each sleepy blade of grass
Sun!, diamond sparkles!


Sun retreats in west
Evening symphony begins
Cricket Concerto!

...............................



  Moonbeams radiate
As the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance!

D.L.White :^)


© Copyright 2000 Dennis L. White - All Rights Reserved
Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

1 posted 2000-05-30 09:36 AM


These are great Dennis they capture their subjects with skillful ease.

Nice

Jon

childomine
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL
2 posted 2000-05-30 09:47 AM


Excellent Dennis!!
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
3 posted 2000-05-30 11:27 AM


I throw shoes at that cricket concerto!! LOL These are great...  
kaile
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singapore
4 posted 2000-05-30 11:48 AM


in my humble opinion, among all the haiku i have read from you, these two are by far the best...unique subjects(crickets), original description(nocturnal dew)....WOW
Songbird
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since 1999-12-15
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Missouri
5 posted 2000-05-30 01:54 PM


I agree with all of the above. Haiku must be in your blood, you do it so well.
dgvarner
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6 posted 2000-05-30 03:31 PM


gotta love that cricket concerto....  

good ones!  


 "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner

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