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kaile
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0 posted 2000-05-29 11:28 PM


Simple Life's Pleasures

Sun pops out from sea~
Blue-gold waters reflect glow~
Rays of warmth calm souls


Fireflies Haiku

Grey clouds blanket sky~
Darkness sets, lost bat depressed~
Light specks shine my way



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dgvarner
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1 posted 2000-05-29 11:55 PM


kaile.."lost bat depressed?"  heehee..i like that one!  

 "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner

Yu Lan
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2 posted 2000-05-30 03:12 AM


hehe, great kaile.. yeah I like that bit best too.. "darkness sets, lost bat depressed".. ^_^

well done..
Lynne

Dennis L. White
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3 posted 2000-05-30 07:02 AM


Kaile,
  These are good, keep writing them!
                             Dennis :^)

  Moonbeams radiate
As the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance!

D.L.White :^)


Mon Cherie
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4 posted 2001-12-04 03:05 PM


Hmmm... the first one abt sunrise, why blue-gold water? Hmm... If I recall correctly, at dawn, the water ain't that blue yet... yes, it's kinda goldish, coz of the sun's rays...

Oh!! I like the "lost bat"... hehe You were referring to your confused self??  

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Florence

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