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Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
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Ontario, CANADA

0 posted 2000-05-29 07:38 PM



~RAIN SONG HAIKU~

5-7-5

Rain's graceful lyric
carefree in spirit it sings
God's soothing love song

By Melissa Honeybee

© Copyright 2000 Melissa P. Long-Monette - All Rights Reserved
Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
1 posted 2000-05-30 07:10 AM


Melissa,
  Your rain song is music to my ears, beautiful imagery in this Haiku! Well Done!
                    Dennis :^)

  Moonbeams radiate
As the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance!

D.L.White :^)


childomine
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL
2 posted 2000-05-30 08:21 AM


Very soothing - beautiful.
Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

3 posted 2000-05-30 09:04 AM


Oh for cool clear rain!!

Lovely Mel

Jon

Songbird
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since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184
Missouri
4 posted 2000-05-30 09:21 AM


Need some of that beautiful rain down here, everything is about to dry up.
JOY 14
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since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
5 posted 2000-05-30 07:18 PM


words so true.


passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
6 posted 2004-12-25 10:56 AM


pretty
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