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twinsgd
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since 2000-02-13
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Ontario,Canada

0 posted 2000-05-29 04:22 AM


Lost dreamer ,Lost Dreamer ,may I have the pleasure,
Will you take my hand, and dance at your leisure.
Will we twirl to a waltz, or pehaps do a twostep,
Or get down and boogie, no lets do the tango.
The castanets clicking and strumming guitars.
You twirl on your toes,eyes looking afar.
We dip and we sway, now dancing the fandango.
Heels lightly drumming, staccato ,crescendo.
Skirts swirling, hands clapping ,the crowd gathers round
we're dancing the tango, we're barely touching down.
Flying across the floor and then disaster strikes
I step on your foot, and you then yell "Yikes!"
You give me a shove ,I'm gone out the door.
I'm finished ,it's over, I'm dancing no more.
Thank you Lost Dreamer ,you're dancing's supreme
But my two left feet,would make anyone scream.

Jack



[This message has been edited by twinsgd (edited 05-29-2000).]

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Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow
1 posted 2000-05-29 07:29 AM


Jack: Thanks for the dance, and man you got me laughing with that stepped on foot, but I would never shove someone out the door I'd just grin and bear it. So next time please don't run when my expression yells Yikes it's just a natural reaction.  

To be honest here I am probably the one with the two left feet never danced with a partner or to any formalized dance, I'd never be able to remember the format...LOL

childomine
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL
2 posted 2000-05-29 10:05 AM


Very good Jack.  You and Dreamer look so good on that dance floor!  Sounds like you like to dance even if your feet don't cooperate!!
                        




[This message has been edited by childomine (edited 05-29-2000).]

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
3 posted 2000-05-29 10:27 AM


great dance..you guys are a trip with your 4 left feet--what fun to watch!

keep dancing!

 "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner

Songbird
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since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184
Missouri
4 posted 2000-05-29 11:05 AM


LOLROTF  Think I got that right!
Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

5 posted 2000-05-30 09:29 AM


Hi Jack

This was so delicious I think I'll ask either you or Lost Dreamer for a dance myself.

Now who will have the pleasure?


Jon

twinsgd
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since 2000-02-13
Posts 416
Ontario,Canada
6 posted 2000-05-30 05:36 PM


Gloria...thank you for the dance...of course you never pushed me..lol...poetic license.
So glad it made you laugh.

Kim...Thank you....but it was Dreamer making me look good.

dgvarner...4 left feet...that's why we were going in circles ...lol

Septsong...pleased you enjoyed it.

Jon...A wise man would ask Lost Dreamer for a dance...and then you would both enjoy.
Jack

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