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Let's Shake the Dance Floor!! (L.D's challenge)
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand 
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Hey, here ya go Lost Dreamer.. here's a dance for you.. ^_^ Music surrounding, And then there she is. She groves and she jives, Movin’ with the rhythm, Swirling music in the room. No-one goes to join her What’s wrong with people here? Arms out invitingly, "Come dance" she calls "Have a little FUN!" Looking around, Toes are tapping, Hips - a - swayin’ All to the groove Of the chick on the floor, Dancing and bopping; On Her Own. I’ve never danced, But the music is booming, Toes start to tap, Eyebrows wiggling, Swayin’ with the beat in my blood. So I kick off my shoes, Throw out my hands; Let’s shake the dance floor!! (oh, the lines "No-one goes to join her / What’s wrong with people here?" hehe I know ppl did, I read Kaile's one.. ^_^) Lynne |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is cute, Lynne! Denise |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Glad to see you on the dance floor,Yu Lan...let's dance  |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Yu Lan, You have met the challenge well, and I'm glad you came to join us on the dance floor, now I see we have even more here, let's all dance till we drop. |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
What a happy, light mood your poem throws out! The ones who won't dance don't know what they're missing!! |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
hey, thanx ppl! ^_^ **smiles** Lynne |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
YuLan; Sounds like a good time to me. Good job on this one. I "felt the beat, good one to dance too." {smile} Great job. Marcy |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Hey ....Do yer wanna Dance? Mesmerising Jon |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
YuL tell Jon, gotta bring all the ladies a bouquet now! ever heard of the twist? hum.... probably not!! Macy |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Putting this in my library and asking permission to use it in the next newsletter... please?? [This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 03-18-2001).] |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
oops... |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
This is a treat to read, light and happy. I'm glad it was brought back up.  To love another person is to see the face of God. |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
hey Lynn! great beat and rythm! makes an old bald fat man wanna jump up and boogaloo! thanks TP the artist once upon... |
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