navwin » Archives » The Corner Pub » First Kiss
The Corner Pub
Post A Reply Post New Topic First Kiss Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
allan
Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620
On the road

0 posted 2000-05-25 12:45 PM


immersed in unreality
suddenly
only a kiss,
but the first

& all life
still beating
outside this pulse

goes on
without me




[This message has been edited by allan (edited 05-26-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Allan Tierney - All Rights Reserved
Moon Dust
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK
1 posted 2000-05-26 06:33 PM


Doesn't matter they are still feelings. Lovely poem  btw
X Angel
Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521
Oregon
2 posted 2000-05-26 06:36 PM


Lovely poem...I am moving it to The Corner Pub..so it can be appreciated by the other poets more fully...
~Heather

allan
Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620
On the road
3 posted 2000-05-26 06:55 PM


Oh surprise! Thanks Heather!    

btw I'm looking back a LONG way with this poem...  



[This message has been edited by allan (edited 05-26-2000).]

jenni
Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 478
Washington D.C.
4 posted 2000-05-26 07:47 PM


allan--

it doesn't matter how long you're looking back, it's still a beautiful look.  

very nice poem here!  

jenni

Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

5 posted 2000-05-26 08:18 PM


You've described it perfectly!

Denise

allan
Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620
On the road
6 posted 2000-05-27 07:49 AM


Thanks all!

(Being 50 I just didn't want y'all to think it had only just happened!)  

Lonelypoet
Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 123
Conklin,NY,USA
7 posted 2000-05-27 08:20 PM


allan,
good poem and it accurately describes how I felt.

Songbird
Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184
Missouri
8 posted 2000-05-27 09:45 PM


Special moment thats unforgettable, described in retrospect. Great job! Enjoyed!
childomine
Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL
9 posted 2000-05-28 09:55 AM


Few words to describe a powerful moment.  And so accurate!!  We don't often forget the first of anything. Very good Allan.

[This message has been edited by childomine (edited 05-28-2000).]

dgvarner
Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
10 posted 2000-05-28 02:54 PM


wow...the first kiss--i remember being so scared i'd do it wrong!  haha!  but you've described it so beautifully...

 "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner

breezeinnc
Junior Member
since 2000-04-26
Posts 47
USA
11 posted 2000-05-28 03:09 PM


The memory of the first kiss is never lost you feel it forever even through the other ones

breezeinnc

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » The Corner Pub » First Kiss

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary