~petals~ (the beginning of a poem)

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~petals~ (the beginning of a poem)

X Angel
Senior Member

since 1999-11-07

Posts 1521
Oregon

0 posted 2000-05-25 02:35 PM

petals fallen on spring's lush green
wind swirled and swept
into a rain of pink kisses
whispering over my hair
down onto my shoulders
slipping down my arms
and falling from my fingers
to float softly to the earth

"Our life, exempt from public haunt, finds tongues in trees, books in the running brooks, sermons in stones, and good in everything."
--William Shakespeare

patricianne
Member

since 2000-05-04

Posts 66

1 posted 2000-05-25 07:23 PM

What a beautiful image you have brought to us, the rain of pink petals. Would love to be there to feel the soft caress myself. Lovely poem!

childomine
Senior Member

since 2000-01-25

Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL

2 posted 2000-05-25 10:09 PM

Beautiful, soft, serene and comforting. Can't wait to see the rest of it!!!

...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is....
Black Eagle
Oglala Sioux holy man

jenni
Member

since 1999-09-11

Posts 478
Washington D.C.

3 posted 2000-05-26 07:51 PM

heather--

this is a lovely piece on its own, an impressionist's sketch, like a monet miniature. very nice!

jenni

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

4 posted 2000-05-28 04:10 PM

"Raining pink kisses".... I like it - I like it...

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