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Canopy of Stars (I found him, Gloria!!) (repost from Open 6)
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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We sway beneath a canopy of stars To music strumming softly on guitars On velvet sands you hold me in strong arms And fly me to the moon with all your charms. You softly whisper sweet things in my ear A fire burns as close you hold me near And to the pounding rhythm of the sea We lose ourselves in passion's ecstasy. Then underneath soft moonlit midnight skies We lie enraptured gazing into eyes Now singing songs of our undying love Heard only by we two and stars above. Once more you pull me close and gently kiss My face, my neck, again I know your bliss; As cheek to cheek we stroll along the dock You vanish to the clanging of my clock. Denise |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Denise, This is grand. ~smiles~ us and our dreams where's reality?...LOL I love this poem Denise it's just perfect.  |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Very lovely. I loved the "twist in the tail"! |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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Thank you, Gloria and Allan for reading and commenting! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks again for lending me your dream guy, Gloria! I'm glad you liked the twist, Allan! I enjoy doing them when I can think of them! Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ This is just a beautiful thing ! 'Then underneath soft moonlit midnight skies We lie enraptured gazing into eyes Now singing songs of our undying love Heard only by we two and stars above.' I was just playing in the Pub archives and found this little gem ! DELIGHTFUL ! Thanks for sharing. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Glad Marge unearthed this. The nice thing about dream guys is you don't have to pick up their socks. I enjoyed this very much.To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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This was a real resurrection, Marge! LOL I had totally forgotten about this one! I wrote this in response to a challenge from Lost Dreamer (Gloria) She graciously allowed me to borrow her dream guy since I never remember my dreams! I'm glad that you both liked it, Marge and kcsgrandma! ROFL @ not having to pick up his socks!  Thanks for reading and for your lovely replies! Denise [This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 10-14-2000).] |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
I like the ending on this one too........I also love the scenes you painted with your words.........lovely Jon |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dear Denise; Sometimes the fantasy is soooo much more fun than the reality. (no belching either) All kidding aside, I love the flow and the imagery in this passionate, romantic poem. Beautiful! Love, Ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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Thanks, Jon and Ellie! I'm glad you both enjoyed it! Dream guys tend to be perfect, don't they?.....hehehe Denise |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
denise i read and i enjoyed many thanks to marge |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
love it Denise..glad i peeked in tonight.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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Thank you, kaile and Victoria! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Denise |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
I was also strolling through the archives and came across this...it's just lovely... Best |
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Denise
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Thank you, Bestgirl! I'm glad you thought so! Denise |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
You always have such a way with words.. This is very lovely..  |
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