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Virgo
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0 posted 05-25-2000 11:31 AM       View Profile for Virgo   Email Virgo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Virgo


I'm better for knowing you
This much is true
You showed me how to love
You made my heart feel brand new

Loving you in so many ways
I don't know where to start
Regardless of how it is said
You will always be in my heart

We started out as strangers
We then became friends
We know eachother as lovers
Not wanting that part to end

What has to come...
Let's just let it be
We will always be as one
Even if friendship is what will set us free

And even though for us
The future my be untold
May this bring comfort to you...
You will always have me to hold


 
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Lost Dreamer
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1 posted 05-25-2000 12:14 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

This poem is beautiful, I love it. It speaks the depth of true love.  
Denise
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2 posted 05-25-2000 12:43 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very beautiful, Virgo!

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allan
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3 posted 05-25-2000 01:21 PM       View Profile for allan   Email allan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit allan's Home Page   View IP for allan

Yes, very well thought out and executed. Good writing!  
childomine
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4 posted 05-25-2000 02:30 PM       View Profile for childomine   Email childomine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for childomine

Beautiful poem to express beautiful thoughts.

 ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is....
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