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Virgo
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since 2000-03-27
Posts 46
tx

0 posted 2000-05-25 11:31 AM



I'm better for knowing you
This much is true
You showed me how to love
You made my heart feel brand new

Loving you in so many ways
I don't know where to start
Regardless of how it is said
You will always be in my heart

We started out as strangers
We then became friends
We know eachother as lovers
Not wanting that part to end

What has to come...
Let's just let it be
We will always be as one
Even if friendship is what will set us free

And even though for us
The future my be untold
May this bring comfort to you...
You will always have me to hold


 

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Lost Dreamer
Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow
1 posted 2000-05-25 12:14 PM


This poem is beautiful, I love it. It speaks the depth of true love.  
Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-05-25 12:43 PM


Very beautiful, Virgo!

Denise

allan
Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620
On the road
3 posted 2000-05-25 01:21 PM


Yes, very well thought out and executed. Good writing!  
childomine
Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL
4 posted 2000-05-25 02:30 PM


Beautiful poem to express beautiful thoughts.

 ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is....
Black Eagle
Oglala Sioux holy man


passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
5 posted 2004-12-25 10:59 AM


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