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patricianne
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since 2000-05-04
Posts 66


0 posted 2000-05-24 05:58 PM




               Dance With You


     How I would love to be there,
     dancing with you.

     Each alone-in our own world,
     movement,dreams,remembering.

     We could both pretend,
     Our parteners...our soulmates.

     I'll join you from afar,
     spinning, eyes closed,smiling.



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childomine
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL
1 posted 2000-05-25 07:26 AM


This sounds soooooooooo nice.
Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow
2 posted 2000-05-25 08:44 AM


Patricianne, Your poem is great, you met the challenge well.   Any requests for the D.J.?
blackhalo
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since 2000-02-15
Posts 467
Denver, CO
3 posted 2000-05-25 10:28 AM


Dancing is one of my favorite things.  Swing dancing though, not ballroom.  I'm no good at that!  ~LOL~
Alicia

Denise
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4 posted 2000-05-25 11:05 AM


Yep, challenge well met!  

Denise

kaile
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singapore
5 posted 2000-05-25 08:07 PM


Ditto all the rest....this sounds so sweet
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