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Wobbly Head Bob
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since 2000-05-15
Posts 299
Virginia, USA

0 posted 2000-05-22 02:51 PM


Was it just a moment
Was it just passing time
I kinda really want to know
Cause you've been on my mind
I've never tasted lips so sweet
Or held such an angel in my hands
I swallowed you with my eyes
And I'd very much like to again
But I can't bring myself to say this
I don't know where to begin
If it was just that night
You know I'd understand
But its just my nature
To want to be more
I don't want to hurt you or scare you away
I just want you in my arms
Right now and everyday
My babbling words aren't sensible
But honestly nor am I
I'm sorry if this wierds you out
Or makes you run away
Cause I'd be losing something
That I could've held another day


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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-05-22 03:40 PM


This is very nice, Wobbly! Very well written!

Denise

childomine
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL
2 posted 2000-05-22 04:01 PM


This is very good Bob.  Was it just a moment????
MagnoliaBlue
Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367

3 posted 2000-05-23 12:17 PM


This is sooo sweet...  you titled it:
"Confused, I think, perhaps, oh damn it what the hell" ...so send this to her already...whatcha' waitin' for ?

MBlue



 

blackhalo
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since 2000-02-15
Posts 467
Denver, CO
4 posted 2000-05-23 11:19 AM


WHB,
I agree with MB, you should send it to her.  I feel this way about a guy that I am really good friends with right now.  I clued him onto this sight, but I guess he didn't feel the need to join.  Thanks for your post.  Believe it or not, it means a lot to me.
Alicia A. Renzelman

Wobbly Head Bob
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since 2000-05-15
Posts 299
Virginia, USA
5 posted 2000-05-23 02:15 PM


In case anyone reads this or is interested a very happy yours trully is proud to report that while this poem describes to you a moment its just been confirmed that the subject is in fact very interested!  Thank God that females have best friends that like to talk! hehe!
Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow
6 posted 2000-05-23 06:27 PM


I enjoyed your poem, and I am happy that things are working for you also.  
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