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Lonelypoet
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since 2000-05-10
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Conklin,NY,USA

0 posted 2000-05-21 03:44 PM



  I am loveless,
no one loves me.
  I love you,
why can't you
love me??
  I love you,
love me???

© Copyright 2000 Chris - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2000-05-21 06:29 PM


Very sad  

Denise

Dark_kisses_Within
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since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
2 posted 2000-05-21 10:28 PM


Simple yet a very strong poem.  I know exactly how this one feels.  Just recently I have said this to a man.  Sad thing is... I got no reply  
Nice work once again
Dark_kisses


 I do not love you for being perfect.....
I love you for being perfect for me!!



childomine
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL
3 posted 2000-05-22 04:03 PM


Very strong indeed.  I don't believe there is anyone who isn't loved but I too have been in the emotional place where I didn't think I was.

[This message has been edited by childomine (edited 05-22-2000).]

epoet
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since 2000-05-11
Posts 291
grand rapid,MI, usa
4 posted 2000-05-23 08:23 PM


sad very sad.  no one should ever feel this way.  not even me with a thoughtful, pondering soul has ever felt this sad before.  touching

 P. J. Kotrch
carpe diem
A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love

Severn
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since 1999-07-17
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5 posted 2000-05-24 08:39 AM





Lost Dreamer
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Somewhere near the Rainbow
6 posted 2000-05-25 08:23 AM


I agree that this is sad, but I don't think anyone is loveless, sometimes we blind ourselves with negativity, when in reality what were searching for is right there. I hope you find that love and it carries you to happiness.  
blackhalo
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since 2000-02-15
Posts 467
Denver, CO
7 posted 2000-05-25 10:32 AM


Sad but beautiful
alicia

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
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Ontario, CANADA
8 posted 2000-05-26 06:02 PM


~Lonely poet~

A sad piece, short and to the point.  I often feel this way, so unloved, unrequited love and rejection is very painful indeed, I feel your pain, but I promise that you will find your soulmate and be loved forever, keep smiling and have faith

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
9 posted 2000-05-28 11:44 PM


i think the hardest person to love is oneself...but necessary, in order to BE loved..i hope you find love--but look inside first...  

 "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner

Lonelypoet
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since 2000-05-10
Posts 123
Conklin,NY,USA
10 posted 2000-05-29 09:31 AM


Thank you all for writing and taking the time to comment on my poem. This poem was written about a year ago whern the love of my life left.
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