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Yu Lan
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since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand

0 posted 2000-05-20 08:08 PM


Daydreamer

Empty voices,
Echo around the room;
I hear the words,
But their meaning eludes me,
For my mind is not here...
I’m sitting in a field,
Back against a maple tree,
Threading daisy chains,
In warm, summer sun.
Sky above me, full of birds,
Chattering amongst themselves.
Pixie in a toadstool house,
Hanging out her pixie clothes
Waves a cheery greeting,
As I tie daisies in my hair.
A far off voice, calling my name.
Glance up, sun shining, leaves twinkle,
Disappear and teacher’s face,
Impatient for an answer
To an unheard question.
"Umm, yes?" I guessed.
"Good save" she said,
And I knew she knew;
For a minute,
I was not here.


Lynne


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Swåmp¤Faerÿie
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since 2000-03-29
Posts 358
Illinois
1 posted 2000-05-20 11:11 PM


Lynne,this is totally awesome!! I adore this poem. It's so.....dreamy and rather witty =] wonderful wonderful  

swampie

 And there she weaves by night and day,
a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson

Swåmp¤Faerÿie
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2 posted 2000-05-20 11:12 PM


Lynne,this is totally awesome!! I adore this poem. It's so.....dreamy and rather witty =] wonderful wonderful  

swampie

 And there she weaves by night and day,
a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson

Yu Lan
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since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand
3 posted 2000-05-21 02:49 AM


Hehe, thanx swamp, thanx swamp. (lol, posted twice, *_^) glad u like it. ^_^ I wrote it in history, while doing a little daydreaming of my own.. *_^

Lynne


Denise
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4 posted 2000-05-21 10:19 AM


Delightful daydream!  

Denise

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5 posted 2000-05-21 12:00 PM


YuLan~
Ahhhhh !  My favorite place ...
I often go to 'the meadow of my mind'.

This is wonderful and takes me with you in an instant.  Keep those daydreams alive.
Serenity is found in the meadow.
Good save, indeed !
~*Marge*~


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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
6 posted 2000-05-21 03:25 PM


"pixie in a toadstool house" Great stuff. I really believe that Daydreaming is gift to keep us sane. Beautiful poem. Ellie

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Yu Lan
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since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand
7 posted 2000-05-21 07:49 PM


Thank uuu Denise, Marge..
yeah, hehe.. my favourite place too.. often more interesting than lessons.. *_^
Oh, to keep us sane? Now there's a thought! ^_^ Weeell.. not sure it has worked in my case, 'tho I sure do dream a lot.. =P woaw, pretty crazy myself.. lol.. joking. ^_^ thank u guys..

Lynne


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