navwin » Archives » The Corner Pub » Playing Free
The Corner Pub
Post A Reply Post New Topic Playing Free Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Lost Dreamer
Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 2000-05-19 07:15 PM


I would like to apologize to all of you for my lack of responses lately, this poem kind of explains it, I'm going through some kind of crisis in my mind, and I hope I can concur it soon.

Playing Free

The ax is chopping away
who I am
or more the who I've grown
up to be,
my mind spins on axis
playing me.
The sum of twenty
plus nineteen
equals a very innocent
seventeen,
my mind spins on axis
playing mean.
Yesterday, today,
tomorrow
does any of it matter
as weeds grow?
My mind spins on axis
playing sorrow.
The master slyly hides
the key
then charges an exuberant
amount called a fee,
my mind spins on axis
playing free.


© Copyright 2000 RiaL - All Rights Reserved
Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-05-19 08:35 PM


Cheer up, Gloria, everything will be okay. HUGS

Denise

Lonelypoet
Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 123
Conklin,NY,USA
2 posted 2000-05-20 09:53 AM


Dreamer,
Good poem. It has a deep meaning in my opinion.

Yu Lan
Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand
3 posted 2000-05-20 07:16 PM


mm.. nice poem.. made me think.. well written, deep emotional poem..

Hugzz..
Lynne

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » The Corner Pub » Playing Free

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary