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Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

0 posted 2000-05-18 11:31 AM


Summer is almost here,
May be a hot one I fear,
I must prepare steady,
So I will be ready,
Better get my butt into gear!

The swimming pool has to be filled,
The water heated, so it isn't chilled,
The chemicals cost alot,
But it's worth it if its hot,
I'll worry 'bout it later when I'm billed.

The old ladder was rusted and weak,
As you climbed, it would rattle and creak,
So I threw it away,
For a new one I must pay,
This project is getting more expensive as I speak.

I must run the filter 24-7,
If I don't the Algae will leaven,
A swamp I don't need,
Where the mosquitos would breed,
And ruin my little bit of heaven!

At last, the pools lookin' fine,
My summer oasis divine,
But the bills just arrived,
And if I'm going to survive,
I'm going to have to work alot of Overtime!

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       Moonbeams radiate
As the veiling cloud has past
    Playful shadows dance!

         D.L.White :^)



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Wobbly Head Bob
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since 2000-05-15
Posts 299
Virginia, USA
1 posted 2000-05-18 11:37 AM


*ROTLMAO*  Yes!  Thats exactly how it goes!  Oh the price we pay for a little slice of heaven!  Wonderful limerick, I loved it, and am still laughing!
Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

2 posted 2000-05-18 11:57 AM


I can picture you there Dennis sunning yourself by the pool.

Hey don't work to hard

Jon

PhaerieChild
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since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787
Aloha, Oregon
3 posted 2000-05-18 02:42 PM


Them things are pricey for sure but it's sure to be worth it eh? Love the limerick!

 Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho



Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
4 posted 2000-05-18 03:32 PM


Big smiles here, Dennis ....  

BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
5 posted 2000-05-18 03:56 PM


Hehehe Don't work too much overtime Dennis, you have to have time to enjoy a dip in the pool.  This is great, and oh so true! Bonnie
ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
6 posted 2000-05-18 04:10 PM


neat limerick! LOL! Oh well, now you can enjoy. Work on that tan. Ellie

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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

7 posted 2000-05-18 07:45 PM


I've always wanted a pool of my own...now I don't! Thanks for the eye-opener, Dennis!

Denise

deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
8 posted 2000-05-18 08:48 PM


Dennis,
You really wrote a funtastic poem this time--
How costly the simple pleasures in life cost anymore--but evewn more costly if we let them all pass us by--Go for it Bro.!!!
               David

Swåmp¤Faerÿie
Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358
Illinois
9 posted 2000-05-19 04:01 PM


Dennis i love it!! LOL made me chuckle...your words are so true...and entertaining too!! =]

swampie

 And there she weaves by night and day,
a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
10 posted 2000-05-20 11:42 AM


huge LOL ah the joys of summer... enjoy the pool, hopefully the weather will stay nice after all your hard work.
Yu Lan
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since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand
11 posted 2000-05-20 08:06 PM


hehe, not bad, Dennis.. not bad at al. ^_^
yep, i'n't it all like tha?!! ^_^

well done..
Lynne

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