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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA 
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Angels surround me, and my best friend beside me, on this long trip to Ohio. Endless greenery of springs deep ending. A sky so full of clouds, that hover like giant marshmallows in search of hot chocolate. The fields newly planted, fertile with the birth of falls harvest dreams. Have all put me in a poetic coma! 02 |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
LOL....I think this is great!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
If this is a coma I want to be in one. This sounds wonderful! Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Ellie, What delightful imagery, Your comas are very colorful! Very nice! Dennis :^) |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh Ellie I love this....Dropped into the Pub for a minute and find "giant marshmallows in search of hot chocolate" this is great. I go into coma's on road trips too. Unfortunately they're not nearly as picturesque as yours!!!! Why not just jump over to NY and we can check out that fireplace.......Bonnie [This message has been edited by BSC (edited 05-18-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Now I could go for a coma like that! Very beautiful, Ellie! Denise |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Ellie, It seems that your are very VERSATILE and imaginative in Your Poetic Coma states--and you see more in such a state than many see with their eyes wide open. This is a lovely entertaining piecew. I enjoyed it-and I appreciate You! David< !signature--> "GOD GIVES- but man must open his hand." (German Proverb) [This message has been edited by deleeme (edited 05-18-2000).] |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Surprised to find you in the Pub, drinking Hot Chocolate?? In a Coma no less, or maybe just intoxicated?? LOL Nice poem as usual.. |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
I can only ditto WildChild. Nice to see you here in the Pub! alicia |
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