What a wonderful poem Jon!! I love it all the way through!! Especially the way to describe the flowers so well...each with it's own.......personality. I like the way you describe the Lily in particular,they are a little vain aren't they ;] This is a VERY sweet and very good poem,looking forward to reading some more.
And there she weaves by night and day, a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson
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