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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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5-15-00 for: abc BREATHE i listened as your voice faded to silence. then through the air i could hear you breathe, soft and rythmic in my ear. i closed my eyes and i could almost feel your soft breath on my skin. i could feel the warmth of your body next to mine. i wanted to reach for you to touch your face, your lips. i wanted to hold your hand in mine. i listened as i willed myself to open my eyes... pressing the reciever closer to my ear, i sighed--a quiet sigh. maybe soon you'll be near enough to touch... until then, i listen-- i dont want to miss a breath... --dgvarner |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Welcome to the pub. Lovely first post. You'll like it here Jon |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
mmmm so romantic! Welcome to Passions. Hope to see many more of your poems. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, dgvarner! This is lovely! Please check your e-mail for a special welcome! Denise |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
I can only ditto the above. Beautiful first post, I know you will love it here! The Pub is a place of friends and best friends! Welcome! Alicia |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
thank you--all of you  i've gotten a really nice welcome..have put my poems other places in the past (sent to cards, books, etc--been scammed once or twice...) was a little paranoid about putting them out there on the web..but you guys have made it worth it already..thanks for the imput and thoughts! and thank you to breezeinnc for talking me into this.. dgvarner |
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breezeinnc Junior Member
since 2000-04-26
Posts 47USA |
I know you have so many poems, but this is a wonderful first poem for others to share. we all hope to see many more here. thank you for sharing breezeinnc |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- love this one. i can just picture you there on the phone with him...just listening to him breathe. very nice. love ya, -tricks "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
I like this one. Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
This is beautiful. I can indeed feel exactly what the subject is feeling. And I was pleased to see your thanks to breezeinnc, who also sent me here. It's nice to have mutual friends.To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought this poem was extremely sweet. I loved it. Just picturing everything described within the poem made me smile.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
DG, Wow! I missed your first post, I'm glad it came up to the top again! This is a beautiful poem of longing and patient expectation. A belated welcome to Passions! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
breeze..forgive me..i never did say thank you for your reply..many thanks to you tricks..i miss him..i still miss him.. maria..thank you  glad you stopped by!k..this is a "feel-good" poem..so i'm glad you could feel it.. ...unfortunately, its also a poem of quiet longing... dopey..glad i could lend a smile thanks for reading!dennis..yes, my friend, it seems you did miss my first post  glad you read me on my second time around thank you for your reply!hugs, dg she doesnt want the kind of love she can live with--she wants the kind she cant live without -clint black |
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