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Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
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Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 2000-05-16 06:01 PM


This poem is a bit strange I admit, my mind just started spitting out lines and I went with it.


Where's The Musketeer Of Honor

The blistering blades of harmony
slackening of noose relentless,
crimson boiled anger displayed
whilst pagan disaster rummages.
Craze the iceman as he bellows
selling whistles to deaf imbeciles

Where's the musketeer of honor
bestowing virtuous bonds of love,
casting radiant vibes of hope
where mangled minds drip pain?

Roads of shrunken smiles dilate
when squired ladies round the bend,
class of virtues held within court
as molten women fear reproach.
Gardened men place costly blame
lingering bonnets tattered away.

Where's the musketeer of honor
bestowing virtuous bonds of love,
casting radiant vibes of hope
where mangled minds drip pain?


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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-05-16 10:06 PM


This is very interesting, Gloria, very complex. I like the idea of that musketeer of honor. It sort of reminds me of the poem I use for my signature (see below)...hehehe

Denise

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~


Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

2 posted 2000-05-17 05:53 AM


Great in a tangled sought of way.

Like a sword fight.

Jon

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