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Jonas
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since 2000-03-03
Posts 796
Oregon

0 posted 2000-05-16 04:05 PM


Magical

Twilight time
Our time my beloved
Please come with me
and ride the silver crest
of the moon's rays
as we love with abandon
Rejoicing in the freedom
of the velvet night

O' how I yearn
to hold your delicate hand
and gaze passionately
into your sparkling eyes
as they reflect the starlight
that surrounds us

To see your golden hair
floating wistfully
around your angelic face
as you begin to glow
with the excitement
born from the crystal ether
that envelopes us

And when the first rays
of the morning sun
peak playfully
over the tallest mountaintop
I will kiss you softly
Delighting in the sweet taste
of your warm lips
as we slowly settle
to mother earth
bathed in morning's glow

© 5/16/00
Gary Pence


© Copyright 2000 Gary - All Rights Reserved
Wobbly Head Bob
Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299
Virginia, USA
1 posted 2000-05-16 04:13 PM


Beautifully erotic!  The kiss as the sun crests the horizon is a very magical image, a very magical moment.  Congrats on a good writing!
Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-05-16 04:17 PM


Wow! Gary, I think this is the most beautiful you have ever written! Yes, it is certainly magical!

Denise

Jon Mewett
Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

3 posted 2000-05-17 05:57 AM


Magical indeed with gentle images and love in evidence,

Jon

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