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Wobbly Head Bob
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since 2000-05-15
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0 posted 2000-05-16 03:03 PM


I picked you from a field years by
And until now I've wondered why
How I chose you on that day
In a pasture far away
There were thousands just like you
But something drew me to you

You're like the star only I can see
Beyond the skies looking down on me
I feel the grace the love you shower
I know I'll never forget...my Flower

I put you in a vase so high
Know that I'll never say good bye
To my one true only friend
You would be there till the end
There were thousands just like you
But something drew me to you

You're like the moon light on my face
The light that spills to fill my space
I hold you close to end the hour
I will never let go of you...my Flower

I hold you up and anger why
How could you leave how could you die
Your pedals pale and limp layed down
Drenched in my tears I'll surely drown
There were thousands just like you
But something drew me to you

You're like the soul that speaks to me
In a language only I can see
I cuddle up I cry and cower
I have lost my only love...my Flower






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Denise
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1 posted 2000-05-16 03:38 PM


Wobbly, this is so sad and so beautiful!

Denise

Casonova
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since 2000-04-29
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2 posted 2000-05-16 06:40 PM


Wobbly, So sad, I hope, that you will soon find another flower, that is brighter for you.

                         Casanova.

Wobbly Head Bob
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since 2000-05-15
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3 posted 2000-05-17 11:21 AM


Thank you both for the kind words about this piece!  
Parker
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since 2000-01-06
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4 posted 2000-05-18 12:32 PM


Bob this remind me of one of the first poems I posted here, I too lost my special flower.
thanks for the memory.

parker

ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....
5 posted 2000-05-18 06:54 AM


I think this is a wonderful poem...it brings memories of when I lost a wonderful flower.
Thanks for sharing this.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

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