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Swåmp¤Faerÿie
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since 2000-03-29
Posts 358
Illinois

0 posted 2000-05-15 03:46 PM


There has to be a way to kill time.
To really destroy it & watch it splatter,
at our feet in shreds of a gory slime,
hear it's retreating footsteps patter.

The pain time provides,we could do without.
There is SO much evil imperfection,
that i would gladly forfeit for kinder clout,
or some silken sliver of true affection.

Life is a long,dark,rough, & tumble path,
i've never had both feet on that one road.,
we're forced to smother in a rancid pool & take a drowning bath,
always I’ve had one foot on death & one on life,weighed with a load.

It’s a fact,my friend,death is easy
A simple escape,a surrender perhaps,
But the thought of living makes me queasy.
I’m to stubborn to surrender to such an easy lapse.
So,I’m living,I hate it,but I’ll stay,
Just to conquer & destroy it,
in a more natural way.
You know I won’t ever quit……..



 And there she weaves by night and day,
a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson

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Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

1 posted 2000-05-16 12:13 PM


Your body lives on earth,but your soul lives in heaven,so it is said.

Well written

Jon

Swåmp¤Faerÿie
Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358
Illinois
2 posted 2000-05-19 04:29 PM


Thank you Jon,you always have something kind to say =] i appreciate that =] Thanks!!

swampie


 And there she weaves by night and day,
a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson

warmhrt
Senior Member
since 1999-12-18
Posts 1563

3 posted 2000-05-19 06:26 PM


swampie,

This is the second dark piece I've read here today. Just remember that our reality is determined by our perceptions, and our perceptions can be changed. Think good thoughts...good thoughts are thought of you.

Kris

 the poet's pen...gives to airy nothing
A local habitation and a name ~ Shakespeare

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