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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon 
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Stomp Break the mold Stomp on it and bury the shards of the old Take a new turn and add a twist or two Then double back creating something new Now say goodbye to the masters and let them rest For it's time to begin anew © 5/14/00 Gary Pence |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
This is kind of deep Gary. I've gone through so many changes, broken so many molds yet onward I go - continuing to break molds, to change and grow. I like this. |
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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
This flowed wonderfully fast! Like a flash of light changing direction a planned but completely random way. Inspirational, a "life is what YOU make it" piece. I enjoyed it thoroughly. Thanks! |
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Swåmp¤Faerÿie Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358Illinois |
You know this is really a great poem.....not just because of the words of the flow,but the subject....because there are so many differnt ways to take this and interpit it for each person. Can be breaking the moulds of society,breaking your own rules and allowing yourself to change,there are so many things i can see in this poem...it's really wonderful =] The Great Swampola And there she weaves by night and day, a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson |
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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon |
Thanks everyone. This is about not letting yourself become restricted by traditional thought. And it applies to any situation in life, including poetry. |
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patricianne Member
since 2000-05-04
Posts 66 |
I relly liked this poem too. Couldn't imagine what it was going to be about!! It was very clear and spoke volumes!!  |
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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon |
Thank you patricianne! |
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