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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... 
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Bird of Prey Majesty of flight launched from aerie perch high on the cliff, nestled in rock. Wing tastes the whisper as eye scans below a hunting from above. Treetops conceal the hunter as the very air she rides off to her market, she goes. As movement is sensed an arrow she becomes silently down she strikes. Small, terrified scream deadly talons do pierce success wetting her claw. She climbs in the wind with struggling weight triumphant she soars. She circles her home hungry nestlings demand her prey...still at last. Her beak portions out brood’s survival secure as lunch with a view is served. 5/00 bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Grace and beauty tinged with horror. Well written Bleeding Jon |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is excellent writing, Daniel! Denise |
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patricianne Member
since 2000-05-04
Posts 66 |
Wow! I could picture every word of it. Loved the "Lunch with a view" line. |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Good read. Very descriptive. Great job!!! |
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