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Strosek
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since 2000-04-08
Posts 61
Fourways, Gauteng, South Africa

0 posted 2000-05-10 08:42 AM


I am Dark, soul twisted in the light
I wonder what people see when I walk past
I hear whispers in the dark
I see forms that call me forth
I want to free my mind, feel it all
I am Dark, soul twisted in the light

I pretend to be all powerful, my might unmatched
I feel a dead touch against my soul
I touch the darkness, whole and empty
I worry that life is meaningless, what’s the point of just being
I cry Why is it some people only see this side of me
I am Dark, soul twisted in the light

I understand something are never as they seem
I say people are sometimes sheep, waiting for the slaughter
I dream of the darkness and it’s cold embrace
I try to find hope, but the darkness is more
I hope to find peace, though the darkness always calls
I am Dark, soul twisted in the light


© Copyright 2000 Victor Tunmer - All Rights Reserved
Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow
1 posted 2000-05-10 08:52 AM


I like your other side better, this one sounds too dark and dreary.  
Strosek
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since 2000-04-08
Posts 61
Fourways, Gauteng, South Africa
2 posted 2000-05-10 09:35 AM


Ok, I thought I better explain my actions for the three posts. Any way, I goanna post this note in all three poems, just in case people decide to read them in a different order or something like that.

The reason for the three posts work like this:
(My Better half) This is me 90% of my life, how I devote my time and my view towards others.)
(My other half) as nay of you have seen with my other poems I went through a very dark time in my life, this is 10% of my life which I let free everyonce in a while.
(My Whole) This explains my view on myself at all times this is my reason for doing the things I do.

Thanks for hearing me out.

 May the light of day always shine during the darkest of nights.



Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere
3 posted 2000-05-10 10:17 AM


  I tend to think you have days like this very rarely.. But then again.. Who knows?

 I awake to a world I don't want. There is no transition for me. I am in heaven. I am in hell.

twinsgd
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since 2000-02-13
Posts 416
Ontario,Canada
4 posted 2000-05-10 12:25 PM


Thanks for an inside look but i hope these kind of days are not frequent with you Strosek

Jack

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