I am (the better half) ((answer to challange part 1))

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I am (the better half) ((answer to challange part 1))

Strosek
Member

since 2000-04-08

Posts 61
Fourways, Gauteng, South Africa

0 posted 2000-05-10 08:26 AM

I am Caring, an Angel to those in need
I wonder Will the world find peace or will I always be needed
I hear Happiness and sadness
I see Pain and healing
I want to heal the world
I am Caring, an Angel to those in need

I pretend to be superhuman and heal the worlds pain
I feel others souls
I touch others minds
I worry that the world will only get worse
I cry when I feel the pain in others
I am Caring, an Angel to those in need

I understand the world is flawed
I say those flaws can be fixed
I dream to touch the world in my own unique way
I try to give hope to those in need
I hope my efforts are not in vain.
I am Caring, an Angel to those in need

May the light of day always shine during the darkest of nights.

Lost Dreamer
Member Elite

since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

1 posted 2000-05-10 08:49 AM

Most excellent, I think you met the challenge well, I'm off to read your other half.

Strosek
Member

since 2000-04-08

Posts 61
Fourways, Gauteng, South Africa

2 posted 2000-05-10 09:35 AM

Ok, I thought I better explain my actions for the three posts. Any way, I goanna post this note in all three poems, just in case people decide to read them in a different order or something like that.

The reason for the three posts work like this:
(My Better half) This is me 90% of my life, how I devote my time and my view towards others.)
(My other half) as nay of you have seen with my other poems I went through a very dark time in my life, this is 10% of my life which I let free everyonce in a while.
(My Whole) This explains my view on myself at all times this is my reason for doing the things I do.

Thanks for hearing me out.

May the light of day always shine during the darkest of nights.

twinsgd
Member

since 2000-02-13

Posts 416
Ontario,Canada

3 posted 2000-05-10 10:03 AM

WTG Strosek , a good better half no doubt about it

Jack

Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere

4 posted 2000-05-10 10:14 AM

A very good side indeed...

I awake to a world I don't want. There is no transition for me. I am in heaven. I am in hell.

Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

5 posted 2000-05-11 03:39 AM

ok. now u've sparked my curiosity.. gotta read ur other half..

very good.. *_^

Lynne

JOY 14
Senior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

6 posted 2000-05-12 04:36 PM

What a good way to do it! Now, why didn't I think of that? hee.hee.

Joy

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