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dreamer1775
Junior Member
since 2000-05-05
Posts 20
florida

0 posted 2000-05-09 01:51 PM


in your arms tonight
silenty sleeping
i hear you softly call my name
i feel your hand touch my face
as i dream
in your arms tonight
you hold me close
my breathe turns into yours
within my chest
both heats beat as one
in your arms tonight
i dream sweet dreams
i smile as you kiss my nose
in your arms tonight
i breath your sweet breathe
as i fall in love

© Copyright 2000 kayte - All Rights Reserved
blackhalo
Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467
Denver, CO
1 posted 2000-05-09 01:54 PM


ahhhhh...beautiful description of falling in love.  ironically, for me it is never that soothing.  it usually starts out with a huge fight, and he's gone before the realization hits me.
alicia

breezeinnc
Junior Member
since 2000-04-26
Posts 47
USA
2 posted 2000-05-09 03:43 PM


beautiful ..so much passion it.. can almst feel it

breezeinnc

dreamer1775
Junior Member
since 2000-05-05
Posts 20
florida
3 posted 2000-05-09 07:56 PM


thanks
Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
4 posted 2000-05-09 09:03 PM


This is really nice..makes me want a hug!! Good poem.  
Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere
5 posted 2000-05-10 01:59 AM


How very sweet..   A very good description of falling in love.

 I awake to a world I don't want. There is no transition for me. I am in heaven. I am in hell.

Jon Mewett
Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

6 posted 2000-05-11 09:10 AM


Warm and dare I say slightly EROTIC.......OK

no I won't say that.

Oops   I've said it

Jon

epoet
Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291
grand rapid,MI, usa
7 posted 2000-05-11 11:31 AM


so true. falling in love is such a great feeling, don't ever lose touch with it.

 

a_little_girl
Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307
San Alejandro, HI, USA
8 posted 2000-05-11 06:46 PM


What you say about love is very true...it is a truely beautiful and wonderful emotion, even though my religion teach. says love is a verb...
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