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the Voice of God?

Tramp Poet
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since 2000-01-06

Posts 754
Could Be Anywhere...

0 posted 2000-05-07 01:05 PM

Revisited Again

The call came again
haunting, almost imperceptible.
Was I sleeping, or dreaming
seems my eyes were wide open.

It's a song, maybe not
perhaps just a phantom.
A perception, nay a feeling
subconscious, even lower.

Like a ghostly memory
not really a memory at all.
Awakening with fading dreams
that become quickly forgotten.

Not sure, even if ever
the experience happened.
Was it a voice, a scream
or a correcting whisper?

Perhaps, the voice of God
speaking reality into existence.
Perhaps, just poetic madness
a call no others may hear.

Tell me friend, do you hear it
soft whispers beneath the waves?
Do you awakened with almost voices
can you hear, believe that you hear?

bleeding...

"Tis ink coming from his arm,
Captain!"

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-05-07 10:11 PM

This is beautiful, Bleeding. Very well expressed!

Denise

Jon Mewett
Senior Member

since 2000-03-04

Posts 1304

2 posted 2000-05-08 05:14 AM

Yep seems you got a strong muse there bleeding.

Use it well

Jon

Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

3 posted 2000-05-08 05:58 AM

Very nicely done, I enjoyed.

Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28

Posts 1816
Texas

4 posted 2000-05-09 09:38 AM

Hi bleeding.
Super job here! It's not unusual for us to doubt at times, then a blessing comes along, a song (or poem) given, our spirits are raised and we no longer question our inner strength, knowing "He Is". Great poem. Makes us stop and think. Thank you for this one. Marcy

Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere

5 posted 2000-05-10 02:56 AM

Very nicely expressed. Thankyou for sharing it.

I awake to a world I don't want. There is no transition for me. I am in heaven. I am in hell.

Tramp Poet
Senior Member

since 2000-01-06

Posts 754
Could Be Anywhere...

6 posted 2000-05-10 10:28 AM

greatly appreciate the input, my friends.
thank you each

bleeding...

"Tis ink coming from his arm,
Captain!"

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