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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... 
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Awaken A dear sister writes to remind asks what will you? Be you still, forward or back be you filth or be you pure? Shall you take the Gift and hide it beneath rags? Or dear brother, will you be, what you may? A sense of royalty God gifted in words, nay deed. Shall the craft build chronicle or encourage, enable? What are you doing with the talents gifted to you? Sitting with watch, perhaps wait or striding out in faith? The stream of life is nary still nor immobile. Are you stepping, my friend reaching fore higher ground? Thank you , dear sister for a reminder, break is over. Time to get back to work time to message love, life. bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Excellent work here. I love the wording for sure.  Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
I like the sentiments in this....lovely wording. Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
this is a brilliant piece of work, Bleeding.. I always love to read your poetry.. such lovely words.. sensitive and sensible.. for your sister.. I like it Lynne |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
I love you little brother. marcy |
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