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The Sky Beyond

Forrest Cain
Member

since 2000-04-21

Posts 306
Chas.,W.V. USA

0 posted 2000-05-05 09:17 PM

The Sky Beyond

if I could see the woodwinds
upon the valley drawn
if I could read the mountains
that calls the night to dawn
then I could climb the waters
descending like a song
into the evening shadows
upon the skies beyond.

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

1 posted 2000-05-06 03:20 AM

Mmmm...This is wonderful. I love the feeling it gives me.

Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"

childomine
Senior Member

since 2000-01-25

Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL

2 posted 2000-05-06 08:39 AM

I'm with Temptress - this leaves one feeling reaaaaaal good.

...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is....
Black Eagle
Oglala Sioux holy man

Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

3 posted 2000-05-06 07:33 PM

This is so lovely, Forrest Cain..
upon reading it a second time, there are a few things I don't understand, but they say first impressions last, and this sure is a pretty poem.. ^_^

Lynne

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

4 posted 2000-05-07 10:51 AM

Beautiful words.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Forrest Cain
Member

since 2000-04-21

Posts 306
Chas.,W.V. USA

5 posted 2000-05-07 12:01 PM

Luv and hugs back lizzie and to all the
other kind readers.

luv forrest

[This message has been edited by Forrest Cain (edited 05-07-2000).]

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