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sKiTtLeS
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since 2000-04-12
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wisconsin, u.s.a.

0 posted 2000-05-03 01:45 PM



Wanting you, but not needing heartache.
Needing you, but not wanting the hurt.
Searching your soul with all that I am,
Only to find hidden secrets.

Loving you, but not receiving affection.
Hurting me, and you don't even know.
Breaking what is left of my ravaged heart,
There is nothing I can do.

 sKiTtLeS~

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blackhalo
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since 2000-02-15
Posts 467
Denver, CO
1 posted 2000-05-03 01:49 PM


so much feeling and tru inner thoughts expressed so well in just a few words.  nice work
alicia

ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
2 posted 2000-05-03 04:03 PM


That's alot of emotion in so few words....wow! I like it!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

sKiTtLeS
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since 2000-04-12
Posts 113
wisconsin, u.s.a.
3 posted 2000-05-03 05:34 PM


Thank you girls.  Sometimes it doesn't take many words to express what's straight from the heart.
Thanks again.  

 sKiTtLeS~

Kitty_Fett
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since 2000-03-02
Posts 35

4 posted 2000-05-03 05:46 PM


A vvvveeerryyy true aspect on love. It has its hard days and its mountains, but somehow we always come through.
-Kitty    


 

Denise
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5 posted 2000-05-03 08:43 PM


I'm sure most of us can relate to this! Well done, Skittles!

Denise

Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

6 posted 2000-05-04 07:20 AM


Kinda sad but nicely put Skittles.

Jon

sKiTtLeS
Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 113
wisconsin, u.s.a.
7 posted 2000-05-04 10:08 AM


Thank you all. Your comments are very welcome here, and appreciated.  

 sKiTtLeS~

wonderous
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since 2000-02-29
Posts 75

8 posted 2000-05-04 02:01 PM


Wanting you, but not needing heartache.
Needing you, but not wanting the hurt.

we ve all been there
beautifully put

breezeinnc
Junior Member
since 2000-04-26
Posts 47
USA
9 posted 2000-05-04 08:02 PM


beautiful
straight from the heart

breezeinnc

amazon_lover
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland
10 posted 2000-05-05 01:08 PM


Hi S..!
Its a lovely poem. I've felt the heartache that accompanies with love. I've felt the hurt and pain. But love I've felt above all just gave a vent to all those feelings. In the end I just feel there is only love and not even a trace of hatred.
I've given my heart to her and I'll just wait..
Sincerely
A_L

Yu Lan
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since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand
11 posted 2000-05-06 09:42 PM


agreed. ^_^ all of the above.. hehe..

well said..

Lynne

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