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Tramp Poet
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since 2000-01-06
Posts 754
Could Be Anywhere...

0 posted 2000-05-03 10:39 AM


GREASE MONKEY

She comes into my shop
fresh from wash, buffed and shined.  
Dressed in pearl essence and smiles
I caress her curves, and her behind.  

Run her up on my lift
minutely check, then rotate her tires.  
Rocking her heavy duty shocks
high beams brighten, even higher.

Under her hood, testing her fire
spark plugs working just fine.  
Her radiator is getting warmer
her pistons are working in time.  

Hook her up to my scope
everything checks as is written.
Her tight little engine is purring
like a motorized kitten.

We check her over, in and out
taking one, maybe two test drives.  
Her performance near awesome!
"Oh, Grease Monkey! " she sighs.



  bleeding...

"Tis ink coming from his arm,
Captain!"



© Copyright 2000 Daniel James Burt - All Rights Reserved
PhaerieChild
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since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787
Aloha, Oregon
1 posted 2000-05-03 01:05 PM


This one is cute!! I like it.

 Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho



blackhalo
Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467
Denver, CO
2 posted 2000-05-03 01:29 PM


Very cute!  I love it!
Alicia

ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
3 posted 2000-05-03 04:13 PM


Lol...yep, very cute!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

John the cat
Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357
England
4 posted 2000-05-03 06:17 PM


I love it, bring her to the pub and get her a de-coke

 May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out.

Irish proverb.

Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

5 posted 2000-05-04 07:18 AM


Nice headlights and exhaust too from where I'm sitting.

Start her up.

Jon

Broken_Winged_Angel
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere
6 posted 2000-05-05 03:28 AM


Too cute..  I like it.

 MAY THE ROAD RISE TO MEET YOU,
MAY THE WIND BE ALWAYS AT YOUR BACK
MAY THE SUN SHINE UPON YOUR FACE
THE RAINS FALL SOFT UPON YOUR FIELDS
AND, UNTIL WE MEET AGAIN,
MAY GOD HOLD YOU IN THE PALM OF HIS HAND

Irish Blessing

Tramp Poet
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since 2000-01-06
Posts 754
Could Be Anywhere...
7 posted 2000-05-06 02:48 AM


Thank you all for your kindness and time!
Was afraid this might be too erotic for here...


  bleeding...

"Tis ink coming from his arm,
Captain!"



Yu Lan
Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand
8 posted 2000-05-06 07:43 PM


hehe, this is such a neat poem.. ^_^ lol.. yeah, very cute.. weeell.. it might be too erotic.. if u weren't actually talking about what we thought u were here.. *_^ But I think we all trust you.. hehe, and anyway, this is too good to miss. ^_^

Lynne

Alle'cram
Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
9 posted 2000-05-09 09:43 AM


bleeding, This one is a guy thing. Cute as the car speaks to ya, "grease monkey". Oh me,
then I read your reply, Oh me, your just full of it!! Love you anyway, marcy

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