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DestinysCharm Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 90 |
Love's Gyration Napkin folded triangular your heart, my heart perpendicular... Minds lost in love's gyration small dense words in coloration... Glass of wine fermenting with passion sipping cautiously knowing ration... Hands touch blending epithelial nerves vibration no denial... Sensations pounding need slow release eyes playing deep feelings increase... Band begins playing more intense dancing is our romantic commence... Touching of bodies temperatures rise this evening captures our own surprise... Every dream reached is a rainbows pot of gold. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful and romantic! Did somebody turn the heat up in here?! Denise |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Wow.......Dance on..dance me to the end of love. Jon |
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Jester59701 Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 154 |
Nice work DestinysCharm! Lot's of passion, and so tastefully done! Jester |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
DestinysCharm, this is incredibly beautiful! Gives me a definite case of "poet envy."  Troy Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Whew!!! It used to be chilly but now....PHEW!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Passion: the word that comes to mind, and from now on, when I hear 'passion,' this work will come to mind. Life defines no more than what it is you ask for. April 20, 2000 Alicia A. Renzelman |
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Kitty_Fett Junior Member
since 2000-03-02
Posts 35 |
A very true poem, Destiny. Believe me, I know how yoou feel. < !signature--> Kitty Fett [This message has been edited by Kitty_Fett (edited 05-05-2000).] |
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DestinysCharm Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 90 |
Thanks to all of you, your kind compliments warm my soul.  |
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pandora Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 184 |
Whoa, girl! Sounds like you've been having fun!!! Woohoo! |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
hmm, what a charming poem!! ^_^ nicely said.. |
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DestinysCharm Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 90 |
Pandora, This was just thoughts in motion, thanks for reading Yu Lan, Thank you [This message has been edited by Lost Dreamer (edited 05-10-2000).] |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
A stunning ,romantic piece of poetry. most enjoyable reading in every way. Jack |
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