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Forrest Cain
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since 2000-04-21
Posts 306
Chas.,W.V. USA

0 posted 2000-05-02 11:20 PM


                     You and I

                     you and I
         we both see the same dark of time
                 and space and death
                     you and I
         we both have the same desires of
               love and truth and life
                     you and I
            we both cry for our children
     for their sorrow and happiness and dreams
                are we so different
                     you and I
                  you a black man
                   and I a white.

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ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
1 posted 2000-05-03 04:40 AM


So true!!!!! You express that beautifully in this poem. I wish everyone could see it that way.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow
2 posted 2000-05-03 06:27 AM


Very good poem, you express the situation very well.
childomine
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL
3 posted 2000-05-03 06:34 AM


So much said with so few words.  Too bad we all can't see that we are not so different afterall.  Very good.

 ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is....
Black Eagle
Oglala Sioux holy man


Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

4 posted 2000-05-03 06:51 AM


No matter what colour race or creed
Cut that man you know he'll bleed


So true and well said

Jon

Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

5 posted 2000-05-03 08:32 AM


Very good thoughts in this, Forrest! There really is no difference at all, is there?

Denise

blackhalo
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since 2000-02-15
Posts 467
Denver, CO
6 posted 2000-05-03 01:47 PM


Race seems to be a big issue in today's world, even as we've overcome so many obstacles in that field already.  Don't you wish it would just go away?!?

 Life defines no more than what it is you ask for.
April 20, 2000
Alicia A. Renzelman

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